tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26414616.post5369016486090966494..comments2024-02-20T12:43:55.753-08:00Comments on R. L. LaFevers: Yippe-Ki-YEAY!Robin Lhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02960833482145500665noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26414616.post-34918104425383458102009-04-08T23:22:00.000-07:002009-04-08T23:22:00.000-07:00Oh, I'm glad you got to read this finally, Robin. ...Oh, I'm glad you got to read this finally, Robin. I loved, loved, loved Emma Jean!<BR/><BR/>Shoulda won the Fleischman!<BR/><BR/>:-)<BR/>MaryMary Hersheyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17268062901264527270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26414616.post-70715543935393847662009-04-04T14:59:00.000-07:002009-04-04T14:59:00.000-07:00If the Voice Fairy doesn't manage to pay you a vis...If the Voice Fairy doesn't manage to pay you a visit between now and then, Dave, stop by next week and we'll talk about ways to coax her out of hiding...Robin Lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02960833482145500665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26414616.post-7882037722702035202009-04-03T16:38:00.000-07:002009-04-03T16:38:00.000-07:00I'm taking a rookie crack at first person POV and ...I'm taking a rookie crack at first person POV and having major problems with Voice consistency because I'm more focused on just getting the story down. I hope I'm not sabotaging the whole thing. Maybe the Voice fairy will pay a visit...Dave Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00164450794686655709noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26414616.post-56608341214575019092009-04-03T16:36:00.000-07:002009-04-03T16:36:00.000-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Dave Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00164450794686655709noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26414616.post-20235901302999521282009-04-03T15:25:00.000-07:002009-04-03T15:25:00.000-07:00Dave,I'm so glad you're lurking less! In fact, I'v...Dave,<BR/><BR/>I'm so glad you're lurking less! In fact, I've been thinking of holding a monthly drawing in order to encourage more comments.<BR/><BR/>You know, the annoying thing is I DO worry about voice in my first draft. It's one of the first things I have to nail down. I think what happened with this book, though, was I had to write it quickly, and had about a twelve hour break between turning in Theo III and starting Beastologist II, so I didn't have a chance to cleanse my literary palate.<BR/><BR/>And interesting you should ask about voice. My recent struggles with have made it a topic I'm going to blog a lot about in the next week or two. There are just so many components to it, and it is so ephemeral. Except when it's missing, and then it's glaringly obvious. :-)Robin Lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02960833482145500665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26414616.post-13459997950071619982009-04-03T09:13:00.000-07:002009-04-03T09:13:00.000-07:00I'm determined to lurk less!Congrats on finishing,...I'm determined to lurk less!<BR/><BR/>Congrats on finishing, Robin! Wine beats Windex for celebrating though...<BR/><BR/>Do you worry about Voice on your first draft, or is it something you're more conscious of in re-vision?Dave Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00164450794686655709noreply@blogger.com